Thursday

Thursday

A Story by H
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get your lips off my lips, sister. i don't swing that way.i've been telling you that for months and you don't listen.


"why do you like me so much?"


she wipes her eye make up off her cheek with her thumbs and some spit.


"because you're just about the biggest mistake i've ever made."


"but i'm a girl."


"i love girls."


"but...you're a girl."


"so?"


"why?"


"because one day i'd like to be a man."


there's a dismissive 'pfff.'


"and i sure as hell don't like them."

© 2011 H


Author's Note

H
{ some random dialogue/thoughts. enjoy. }

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That's a great little scene--funny, and very realistic feeling.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is the kind of conversations I imagine the girls next to me at a red light are having. Simple, yet you get the point across. I really enjoyed this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VERY nice! Short, and you made a point. I think it could be an awesome longer story!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I actually found this funny. The end is ironic so that's why I found it funny.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the short snappy dialogue i want this scene in my movie.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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