WAVES AND SEA (PART 4)

WAVES OF LOVE AND IT'S EFFECT

 

Doctors were there to see what's wrong

They tried all medicines they have known,

But his body kept being easy to be flown

Over the waves of the constant pain

Refusing to use any barracks..

 

"

From all what we were taught!

We heard of no cure for love

"

This is what the doctors agreed on

Leaving the sad victim alone at his shore....

 

Whispering from his lips..

Provoked the silence of the black stage..

(Carry me to her town if you want me to live

With her my heart joyfully did relate

Without her I am in pain)

Attached to the line of hope,

They took him and left their home

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

Oh this is so true! Beautifully written.........

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This was beautiful...the journey seeking healing not from the physical realm but from the emotional...a journey that one must take alone if they want to arrive "home."

[Lily Mae]

An ongoing journey of the soul in search of healing...xx I love it..x

[Gypsie]

Beautiful, I would love to see all 4 parts brought together and made into one longer piece. Maybe play with some of the wording, but not to lose the imagery and soulful cry that it has in this raw stage. I do think it is wonderful.