I'm all better

I'm all better

A Poem by Lillian

After surgery, I am feeling a little more warm hearted


I'm alright
The pain is gone
Let's live life.

Here we go,
There's nothing in our way.
No more tears, no wore sorrow.
It's gone. 

Hold on tight,
I'm ready to fly.
I'm ready to let lose.

Sure I've got scars
A bruise here and there.
But who cares?
It will all be gone tomorrow. 

We will be gone. 
Like the pain. 
We will dissapear into the sun. 

I'm alright.
The pain is gone. 
Let's live life.

© 2008 Lillian

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Very nice job- i mean really nice..i would liken your skill to painting with words..
each line is defining and decisive.. this line "like pain dissapearring into the sun
speaks depth as the entire emotion presents itself with power.. very effective poetry

Posted 13 Years Ago

Tomorrow does hold many promisses in it. I like the view point of your poetry. It was upbeat and gave hope. Wonderful write~

Posted 13 Years Ago

I love it ... its kinda like optomistic i write some pretty emo stuff but im an eternal optomist and i like the way you say its gonna be alright..and its true tommorow the pain will be gone... lol i hope you understand what i mean

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Very warm hearted and inspirational write as we all need to remember that wounds heel and even though scars remain the pain fades and life moves on.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is an inspirational piece. I like the repetition of the words: "Let's live life. Now." It's a greate message of hope. Many people who experience profound trauma don't ever find inner peace, for one reason or another. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Good show of strength here. Better to not dwell on the past pains and to live with happiness, since life is only a temporary circumstance. Glad your surgery went well. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is so good.
i get everything that you're trying to say.
you are ever so talented.

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is very good my favorite lillian!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel the same as the previous person to review. The simple stanzas added a lot of meaning, in a convenient manner read. It also can be taken in, in different ways, being pain physically or emotionally, and I like that about this writing. Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This poem is simple, uplifting, and easy to understand. This is what I like about the way you write: (from what I have read) most people use many metaphors, and big words and sometimes confusing stuff

Posted 13 Years Ago

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