Dancing on the edge

Dancing on the edge

A Poem by Lillian

more to come. this is a wokring process


Listen to the rythum of your heart.
How it keeps pace with your life.
You can't help but let your body dance. 

To the joys of life, you want to jump
Into the air with fists raised high
Letting your body flow with no restrictions.
You're on top of world
And you can't help but dance.

To the times of dispare, you want to jump

Into the air with limbs weightless and awaiting

Letting your body fall with no restraints.
You're on the edge of the world
And you can't help but dance.

© 2008 Lillian

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What an uplifting, positive, and optimistic message. It is so true that some days you just gotta' dance. Learning to celebrate the bad with the good and everything in between. I'm anxious to see the progress that comes of this work (though it's already pretty darn good).

Posted 12 Years Ago

Really good for a work in progress.

love those last two lines. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

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A Poem by Lillian