Tiny little white rabbit

Tiny little white rabbit

A Poem by Lox
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Happy Holidays

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I see a white rabbit
A tiny little rabbit
Many little rabbits
Slowly falling to the ground

On the trees and on the walls
Its on everything but my palm
For when I hold
the tiny little rabbit
It slowly goes away
Oh poor little rabbit

It comes from the sky
and settles on the ground
Okay with being stepped on
Complains without a sound

Would I pity the little rabbits?
Or enjoy through the day?
For when the season ends
They'll be on their way...

Oh tiny little rabbit
tiny little white rabbits
see you once more next season
goodbye little rabbits...

© 2020 Lox


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Snow falling and becoming tiny little white rabbits. It's alive and makes you want to reach out and touch them. However, you can't because it will melt in your hand. Something you want to just hold and cherish and it disappears before you can.

Sounds familiar to me. Ha....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

finally someone sees that the rabbits in this poem signify snow. Others have been saying its weird h.. read more
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I like "weird" writings, too. Interesting. You created a quite good pattern in this one. Though I don't quite understand why you wrote 6 instead of 4 lines in the 2nd stanza.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

That's what makes it weird. Haha thank you for the review!
This poem is kinda weird but i like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cherry

8 Years Ago

About people who wanted to be friends but didn't review or something along those lines. Sorry i don'.. read more
Cherry

8 Years Ago

friend just reminded me of the name. it was hijacker. i think it had more to do with being a top re.. read more
Lox

8 Years Ago

Top reviewer you mean. Anyways thanks for the review! I Appreciate it.

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Added on December 21, 2015
Last Updated on July 2, 2020
Tags: Snow, Winter, Cold, Rabbits, White

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Lox
Lox

Batangas, Philippines



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