That Creepy Feeling

That Creepy Feeling

A Book by Gabby Gellerman

Well this is taking creepy to a whole new level


© 2014 Gabby Gellerman

Author's Note

Gabby Gellerman
This was the first story I ever wrote I'm sorry it sucks but I used to only draw

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Well, that was scary to read. I will say though, the tone and the feel of it are spot on. I would suggest working on the flow, showing her escalating her behavior rather than just telling the reader what is happening. Not bad for a first story ever though!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Gabby Gellerman

7 Years Ago

This was the first story I ever wrote

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Added on June 26, 2014
Last Updated on July 1, 2014
Tags: Love, creepy