Childhood Memories

Childhood Memories

A Poem by Gabby Gellerman
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Growing up doesn't mean you have to forget your past. To me my childhood was one of the best parts of my life.

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When i was a kid..
Life was simpler 
  phones could only make calls
computers were for paint and pinball
youtube was just starting out

When I was a kid..
   Technology wasn't the most important thing
   kids had imagination and made even the most boring things an adventure
      it was more fun to play outside and explore the world(even if it was only your backyard)

When I was a kid..
 The bond between siblings was unbreakable
    Max, Josh, and I did everything together
      We had lego building competitions, made mini golf courses in the house
         We played play station in the basement, and watch movies all night
   
When I was a kid..
  TV shows were the best
   Your life would be ruined by missing saturday morning cartoons
The shows taught you life lessons that you wouldn't forget

When i was a kid..
 Life was an adventure
     The scariest thing to hear was I'm telling
            A day at the park could become anything you want it to be 

When I was a kid..
 my childhood was the best
        but I just wanted to grow up
       wanting freedom to enjoy my life

     I was a kid..
      Remembering my past
But now i miss my childhood
   wanting the good times back


I was a kid..
 I was a 90's Kid

© 2014 Gabby Gellerman


Author's Note

Gabby Gellerman
Max and Josh are my 2 older brothers and the picture for this poem is the 3 of us when we were little.
Also sorry for any errors this was my first poem

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Amazing how things have changed in such a short expanse of time, imagine two decades from now, I can't even imagine...love the sweet reminiscing with your brothers, this brought back a lot of memories. Well done, especially in light of the fact that this is your first poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

thank you soo much and yeah i love my brothers more than anything but I never see them anymore
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

That happens when kids get older and have their own lives, my one brother lives in SF and the other .. read more
Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

yeah Max is 5 years older than me so he's 23 and lives in chicago Josh is 2 years older than me so h.. read more



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I really love this. Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I remember still the stories my grandma would relate to my sister and I about her youth; the innocence that permeated her life and her brother's and sisters and friends. This world is in a constant state off flux, things change constantly, decades pass so swiftly,but the constancy of memory remains always. I'm a late seventies/eighties kid, not so far apart from you and my sister and I often recall those blissful days of childhood.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is great for a first poem!
I loved the opening stanza.
Nostalgic.

Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

Posted 9 Years Ago


brings back memories. thanks for sharing. nicely written

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good to hold onto memories. They become better with distance and time. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts and the reasons for the poem. I agree with your logic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


As a fellow 90's kid, this is haunting accurate. Well done. You brought memories to life and, not only that, you brought them to life for somebody you've never met. That to me is incredible. I miss Johnny Bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ian Gilmour

9 Years Ago

Rocket Power? meh....
Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

how is that possible rocket power was one of the best shows ever.. what did you watch
Ian Gilmour

9 Years Ago

DBZ, Johnny Bravo, Courage the Cowardly Dog, Kenan n Kel, X-men cartoon series, Spiderman and Batman.. read more
If this is your first poem...you my friend are gonna go long way!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

thank you zoo much i really appreciate it and yeah it is my first poem I've only been writing for al.. read more
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome
Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

sorry i can not spell either that or auto correct is screwing me over, i just posted a new short sto.. read more
"When I was a kid..
my childhood was the best
but I just wanted to grow up
wanting freedom to enjoy my life"
We all wanted freedom.Yes. But never knew what we were giving up for it. This poem made me remember my childhood. A good write.

PS : Please correct the formatting of the poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


When i was a kid..
Life was an adventure
The scariest thing to hear was I'm telling
A day at the park could become anything you want it to be

Good show, Gabby. I grew up in the 70's and 80's but so much of this rang true for me too:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

Thanks it was my first poem attempt
Such an awesome story :) thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gabby Gellerman

9 Years Ago

thanks hope you can give my other stories a read at some point :)

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