Wanderlust

Wanderlust

A Poem by gabiaimee

I want to see every piece of the world
and not understand exactly what I'm looking at.
I want to wake up to the engine hum
and see distant districts unfolding below me.
I want to wonder what nations I passed
 and not care how long sleep has kept me sheltered.

I want to be noiseless in the deafening world
and to be stunned in the silence of the grand cathedrals.
I want to be so quiet that my exhaling surprises me
and I have to remember to breathe through the stupefaction.
I want to find places where I don't desire to fit in
and simply existing is enough to make me feel whole.

© 2014 gabiaimee


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I love the poem, it resonates with my personal feelings. The rhythm was easy to find and that allowed the poem to flow smoothly this gets a 100 from me :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written. I love the line that says "i want to be so quiet that my exhaling surprises me". It just meant so much. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good Write!! Well i would have loved lil longer piece with a vivid memory of places you've already seen!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem.... your curiosity to see places even when you do not fit in really defines your urge for travel and adventure

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I want to be so quiet that my exhaling surprises me
and I have to remember to breathe through the stupefaction.

A wonderful desire. I want to be part of that. Very nice one dear.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2014
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