Fly

Fly

A Poem by gabiaimee
"

I feel like I'm flying

"
I can't wait for our first plane ride
when I'll have to hold your hand
because I'm too scared of flying
but I'm more afraid to land.

© 2014 gabiaimee


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Good finish, plus it's a very realistic look as I've flown with someone who had to hold my hand because she was afraid. Then I am not sure, you your using flying as love and landing as the reality that falls after say a "honeymoon stage" and I like that, was it done on purpose or was this my interpretation?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabiaimee

9 Years Ago

The metaphor has a few meanings behind it, and that is one of them.



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Good finish, plus it's a very realistic look as I've flown with someone who had to hold my hand because she was afraid. Then I am not sure, you your using flying as love and landing as the reality that falls after say a "honeymoon stage" and I like that, was it done on purpose or was this my interpretation?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabiaimee

9 Years Ago

The metaphor has a few meanings behind it, and that is one of them.
Too short but have great meaning. A fine example of a sweet poem.

but I'm more afraid to land.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2014
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