Shrink

Time can mess with your head.

As the days they get longer
our time it gets shorter.
My worries grow bigger as worries do.
The stakes they grow higher,
my fears they get stronger
My strength it shrinks smaller,
my patience, too.

Reviews

[Robert]

I like the first two lines very much so. Its so very true and have never thought of it exactly like you said it. And the last like about patience, I think as we grow older we lose must of out patience, Although I'm going to try to not let that get the best of me. Very nice poem you have written Gabiaimee.

[Haley Wilson]

We are all dying slowly, and time is a precious thing. Love the way you penned this!

[Saddam]

As the days they get longer
our time it gets shorter.

Rare thought, but real. Thanks for sharing it.

[AaronFreitas]

Sometimes it does start to feel like the stakes are growing and everything in life is collapsing down on us. Nice write :)