Nothing Sounds Nicer

Vacation, please?

Nothing sounds nicer than
rolling northwest and touring the
mountains with you.

Give me some time and a
wide open mind and the falls
and a forest or two.

We'll take my old truck and if
we get stuck we'll just wait
it out in the rain.

Since we don't know where
it is we will go, sit back
and let the river explain.

Seeing your face in this cold
open place made me see a
home I never knew.

All of this time we just
came here to find that
the paradise I needed was you.

Reviews

[KanaDream]

This is beautiful just wanting to spend time with someone and get away. Often our busy lives make us want to leave everything behind so I find it especially cute how there's someone you have that takes you on adventures without having to go on one.

Briefly,In the 2nd stanza 'wide' instead of 'wild' and in the 4th stanza 'what' instead of 'where'.

Keep Dreaming. ^^

[Jonny The Savage]

Such beauty and Romanticism in this piece. Well done.

[Brittany Bostic]

Beautiful I love the simplicity of just going out on a nice long drive, seeing the lake, being out in the rain, but all of it was just to experience life in a simple, fun way.

[zaisham9393]

this is beautiful.I loved the way you wrote.
Thanks 4 sharing ;)!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and I agree. Good to travel with a proper traveling companion.
"All of this time we just
came here to find that
the paradise I needed was you."
The above lines were a perfect closing for the amazing poetry.
Coyote