Find Something

Find Something

A Poem by gabiaimee
"

Help me find something

"
I want to see the whole world
but this moving back and forth
keeps me away from a home
I feel I no longer have.

I'm a hopeless wanderer
really needing a place,
a place or a person
to go home to at night.

I need a constant,
a shelter for me
a comfort to hold
so close to my heart.

I'm still waiting
to find something,
something of mine
to keep for now.

I need it,
some shelter,
just something.
Give me Home.

Come home,
find me,
just stop
searching.

Help
me
find
something.

© 2015 gabiaimee


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I left home at 18 years old. I saw 40 countries and lived or touch 48 states. I landed 10 miles from the place of my birth.
"Come home,
find me,
just stop
searching."
All of us need travel and to test life. We also need solid ground.I enjoyed the poetry. Left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Come home,
find me,
just stop
searching.

Your travel will shall end at home.
So clever and true.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done Gabiaimee, the format is done so well, and I wonder is this a tear?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I left home at 18 years old. I saw 40 countries and lived or touch 48 states. I landed 10 miles from the place of my birth.
"Come home,
find me,
just stop
searching."
All of us need travel and to test life. We also need solid ground.I enjoyed the poetry. Left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a rather nice piece.
Perhaps a little too relatable for me lol.
I especially liked the way it progressed, using the same words and concepts to paint a longing, beautiful portrait.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the progression of this poem and how it ends with the title, nice writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 14, 2015
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Tags: find, something, wanderer, travelling, half, life, divorce, separation, gypsy, moving, move, home, comfort, shelter

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