Love You More

I always will

I'll love you 'till the seas are still
and the sun's no longer bright.
I'll love you every adventurous day
and every sweet, passionate night.

I'll keep you safe inside my arms
until the day my heart stops beating.
I'll keep you fed and happy, love
until the day that I stop breathing.

You'll be satisfied and want for nothing
as long as you're with me.
I'll cheer you on and take care of you
just as you take care of me.

I love you more than yesterday
and I'll love you more tomorrow.
I'll let you keep that heart of mine,
the one you stole to borrow.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad ending to a poem of love.
"I love you more than yesterday
and I'll love you more tomorrow.
I'll let you keep that heart of mine,
the one you stole to borrow."
When the love is borrow only. Still leave a open part in heart for hope for nice ending. Thank you dear poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SmittyJas]

surprise ending was looking for something else but that is the way things can out in this world turned up side down.

[Brittany Bostic]

Quite true, when you fall in love it's like you can see everything differently. Very nice. I love the idea of sending someone all the love you can find in your heart

[AaronFreitas]

Your first two lines are as powerful as it gets Gabi! I want someone to love me like that... I mean only half that much I'll take haha :) Awesome write I love your word choices :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow, that was beautiful! I loved the rhyming scheme and sweet message of love behind the words! Thank you for sending my the RR!