Key To Your Heart

Another weird shaped poem *hides from disgrace*

    You gave

  me         the

  key         to

   your heart.

        I'll

      love

      you

      all

      of

     my

     life.

     We

    were

     one

    from

    the

    start.

   And one day

   I hope

   to be your

   wife.

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

wow...a simple piece in a simple shape
but this is the one thing that you dont want to lose...
the simplicity of life, and the key to someone's heart
*tug you gently out from wherever you are hiding*

[lori c]

oh isnt it grand when someone can touch us in such a way that our heart patters just at the thought of them. in a world where news is full of drudgery and true to life horrors, i love to peek into the happily every after hopes of someone. thanks for the keyhole.

[Demyra]

O_O
I know someone who can do that...wow...

I'm impressed, nice, simple and sweet piece, but the structure really impresses me most. I can't do 'shape' poetry to save my life...

[poddar kushal]

nice structural piece. i hope you are not going to lose the key ...