Trust

My boyfrined and I had one of those little annoying fights about trust. You know what I'm talking about. Not worth fighting about yet must be addressed. I didn't even realize that I was ryhming when I was speaking to him.

If you can't trust me.
How can I trust you?
Why can't you see?
What I say is true.
I give you love and respect.
Why can't you give me your trust?
Think about who your words affect.
What your saying is neither right nor just.
What ever you say.
What ever you do.
I'm the one to pay.
Because I love you.
 

Author's Note

These were not the exact words I said, but most of what I did say ryhmed.
Somehow he remember every word. Maybe I should ryhme when I talk more often.

Reviews

[Luis Gabriel]

beautiful poem in its smooth simplicity, yes you do pay sometimes because you love him...but if you were to not trust on account of avoiding the pain on occasion you would being doing exactly what you dont want him to do and you would be changing you...and thats something that is perfectly fine the way it is...no need to tamper with that. i suggest working it out and both of you trying to come to a solution it may take time...these things sometimes do....patience is kind of a necesity when it comes to trust lol.

peace

-luis

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I say those who don't trust can't be trusted... and trust is so big for healthy love to grow... you brought up the right questions... Bravo for taking a stand.

[angelina neves]

:) lovely!!! Trust should be an important part of any relation... and most of the time, when someone doesn't trust other it is because he/she doesn't trust her/him self, i think!!!