Neon Lights

Neon Lights

A Poem by Gabriel

About a girl


What if we created the universe?

Because kissing you is like the big bang.

There are tons of different matter running through us.

Our lips together, our minds intertwined,

Our silhouettes shine

Due to the neon lights.

The stars above that we are able to see

May be dead already.

Radiation from supernovas are crossing our bodies,

And I feel so close to you.

Our love is just like dark matter. We know it exists yet scientists can't explain what it really is, why it exists, where it exists.

Basically, summing it up,

All we know is that our love and dark matter do exist.


We get into your car. I get into the passenger seat.

You say “Let’s go to a diner”

“Definitely, I’m ready to eat”

We eat our veggie burgers and fries, drinking milkshakes.

This is what I always hoped for:

Love in its raw form.


You take me home

While driving I say

I always thought I’d end up alone.

“Not while I’m alive”.

You say like it’s true,

But I know it’s a lie.


I never expect good things from people.

Even though some are good hearted.

People are mean, that’s a fact.

I wonder why I never became someone

Like that.

© 2017 Gabriel

Author's Note

I don't know if this is the final poem, or if I will add more things and/or remove things.
However, I like it right now,
Let me know what you think!
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i love the 2 last verses they have some interesting mystery and emotion in them

Posted 3 Years Ago

I love it, it reached a new part of me. Hopefully I can be this deep in time lol

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on October 30, 2017
Last Updated on October 30, 2017
Tags: love, life, milkshake, food, people, hate



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