Tunnel Rice

Tunnel Rice

A Poem by Gaston Villanueva
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an advertisement for Tunnel Rice

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Give away the answer and begin at the end,

Could it be that I’m behind your curve of reality but ahead of mine?

 

Live as if this existence were real,

Would you cough during the mellow parts of a classical guitar recital?

 

They say human sacrifice has changed,

I work hard but don’t we all?

 

Sometimes those producing the messages don’t know who is receiving them,

Do good things really happen to good people?

 

Actions serve as a psychological release valve,

Does that makes us a bit jittery?

© 2017 Gaston Villanueva


Author's Note

Gaston Villanueva
thanks for reading

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What's the question to that answer or going backwards or beyond and all realities can be seen as encompassed within them, where you're dreaming more than they're living, a simulation so weak you could willfully shatter it but no one tries. Of these exotic cognitive stimuli Gaston, I thought peeling the first and the third one were deepest and the fourth one's my favorite. I certainly would get me some of that Rice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaston Villanueva

6 Years Ago

Someday we should collaborate on a piece
Thanks for being an exotic cognitive stimuli, Rana!
Rana

6 Years Ago

wowww i'd be thrilled to, yessss :)
we should
Always a delight, Gaston!
Cadel

6 Years Ago

I too, would get me some of that rice.



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What's the question to that answer or going backwards or beyond and all realities can be seen as encompassed within them, where you're dreaming more than they're living, a simulation so weak you could willfully shatter it but no one tries. Of these exotic cognitive stimuli Gaston, I thought peeling the first and the third one were deepest and the fourth one's my favorite. I certainly would get me some of that Rice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaston Villanueva

6 Years Ago

Someday we should collaborate on a piece
Thanks for being an exotic cognitive stimuli, Rana!
Rana

6 Years Ago

wowww i'd be thrilled to, yessss :)
we should
Always a delight, Gaston!
Cadel

6 Years Ago

I too, would get me some of that rice.

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Added on June 19, 2017
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