Can't You See, I'm Changing

Can't You See, I'm Changing

A Poem by Gaurav Walia
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I know I've never been a best guy for you but give me a chance, I think I can try.

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Today I am weeping,
To see that you are gone,
For better or worse,
Yet the reasons are unknown...

My thoughts are torn,
As I lay helpless on a thorned bed,
Constantly whirling,
Like a tornado in my head...

Sound of your footsteps,
Haunts me still,
You're like a wandering soul,
Keeping me in thrill...

Are you ever coming back?
Or should I just die?
Leave this selfish world behind,
And take a walk in the sky...
God forbid,
If I ever curse you,
You know behind this mask,
There has always been a man who loved you...
Stupefied I was,
When you barged out the door,
Within it was,
A pain- bitter and sore...
Not a tear of despair,
Every drop is so pure,
Like a drop from an apple,
Of Eden's garden I assure...
It is now dark and gloomy,
For the pain I caused you,
My toes are getting numb,
At the end my mind is all blue...
Now the time is right,
I'm becoming a better man,
To get out of this fright,
We can come up with a plan...
Touch me again like a soothing summer breeze,
On this dead-cold earth,
Someday I might just freeze,
Stuck in an iceberg,
My existence will soon cease...
Turn around for once,
To see that I'm mending,
The gaps I made,
Can't you see, I'm changing,
Before my love starts to fade,
Can't you see I'm changing,
For I'm the one who is afraid...
 

© 2013 Gaurav Walia


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Beautiful! Brethe-taking !

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is really gd, I could feel every word :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it...
Such sweet sorrow. Ask yourself though, is it worth it?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Haha.. I believe It's not. You should let go of something that hurts or keeps you shackled to the pa.. read more
a lovely piece of ur writings....
nd ofcourse d reality of life can b depicted in dis....nicely penned

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank u Akshita...
Love. A many splendid thing that ties you in knots

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Indeed sir.. Thank u so much.
Everyone deserves a chance for redemption if the call for it is sincere and it is truly reflected in this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank u Avinash...
Very nyc poem. Kinda painful. It is surely very difficult to make others believe dat u r going through a transformation. Regret of letting ur loved 1 go is evident. Beautiful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank u so much Penny. :D
Penny

6 Years Ago

Ur welcum.
God forbid,
If I ever curse you,
You know behind this mask,
There has always been a man who loved you...

sweet lines. We can never ever think bad about our beloved ones. that's the spirit of love :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

That's true. It is an irrefutable spirit.
Thank u Anand...

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Gaurav Walia
Gaurav Walia

Delhi, India



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