Words Out Of Love

Words Out Of Love

A Poem by Gaurav Walia

WORDS OUT OF LOVE

 

Not today but some other day,

I’ll touch your soul with my words,

When I’m a bundle of nerves,

I’ll look into your eyes and make-believe,

That my poem is good,

It’ll give us some relief,

Let go of yourself,

Into the embrace of the beautiful,

When the words pull you up,

The skies will dazzle,

And the stars will breathe upon you,

Like you are their lover,

With an insight for bliss,

You can run faster than you think,

And will win this world in just a single blink... 

© 2014 Gaurav Walia


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A truly fantastic piece of poetry, I am impressed. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ars XD
Ars Goetia Poetry

6 Years Ago

The pleasure was all mine :)
sum lines are damn awesome one....
i like d way u executed dis...gud 1

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Akshita.
awwwwww....I like the ending...mhhh..nicely crafted

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank You, Cassie.
"when iam bundle of nerves..." when i read this line i felt as if a promise is made cross the heart...
i like reading it...Good work Gaurav...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mate.
We all wish for a haven of bliss...Someday...Some other day...Very beautifully penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank You, Divya.
Just one thing. The line "Let go off yourself" Did you mean "Let go of yourself"?

That out of the way, I think this piece was damn beautiful, enough to make me say damn :) I loved your play of words!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Oops! My bad...
Thanks for liking it though... XD
Kind of Magical with some good imagery. Good Job

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank you, BR...
This is so well written and the words so heartfelt.Well penned my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya...
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Promise of love..but whether the intended receiver will be able to value it..is the suspense. Even if it does not it is still a beautiful poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thanks Avinash... i'm glad you liked my way of promising... :P
great write, interesting thoughts you've place on this page.. please, though, dont make believe your poem is good! (you are talented for sure!) believe in yourself!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav Walia

6 Years Ago

Thanks a mill, Bowers... you're very kind.
Bowers

6 Years Ago

your welcome! :D

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

541 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 23, 2014
Last Updated on January 25, 2014
Tags: words out of love, words

Author

Gaurav Walia
Gaurav Walia

Delhi, India



About
I might be just another guy putting his thoughts on a page but not mincing my words, I only tell the unvarnished truth, gulping down the fear, I dive into the expanse of love, hatred, fantasy, blood, .. more..

Writing
LIFE LIFE

A Poem by Gaurav Walia


PSYCHO PSYCHO

A Poem by Gaurav Walia



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


The Artist The Artist

A Poem by MsJewel


Just like... Just like...

A Poem by Blue