Luna's Magic

Luna's Magic

A Poem by Gavin Keary
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Something I wrote for my love.

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The moon shines bright,
in ilustrious light.
We are together,never parting, forever.
We are in each others arms,
one captivated by the others charms.
Carefree bliss,
with just one kiss.
The time is right, on the hour of midnight.
Let us spread our wings,
and see what morning brings.

© 2008 Gavin Keary


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Gavin Keary
I hope you like it!!!

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This poem rocks! I like how use the moon to symbolize love when it usually symbolizes mystery. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dude I like all your work. So I guess there isn't any point in me reviewing...oh well! LOL I'll do it anyway!

~Ashleigh

Posted 15 Years Ago


great flow. I dig it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanx you guys. Way to make a new guy feel welcome. I will be looking over your writings ASAP.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That was a super cute little piece! I love the way it all flowed together. Very nice ^__^

Posted 15 Years Ago


Great write! Very romantic. I liked the structure. It has a good flow. I could feel the emotion through the words you chose. I liked the subtle rhyme. Very nice!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Absolutely wonderful!It has a dark tone,but it's beautifully expressed,rhythm is really good,great job

Posted 15 Years Ago


very romanitic.
very moving.
love the description for i got a very vivid image in my head.
swell writing!
keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Gavin Keary
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