Lucas Wave

Hidden
In
The Open
It Is There For
Eyes That Can See, Minds That Know
Ears That Are Extended To Hear That High Pitch
This Bloodhound Is In Tune With The Hidden Forces That Guide The Universe
So Much So That This Creature Analyzes
Every Speck That Can Be
Sighted Or Heard
Tasted or
Touch'd
Senses
Guide Us
On
The Path To
Mental Greatness
And Maybe That Great Leap Up
Upward And Outward, A Chromosonal Jump
An Evolutionary Lift Onto A Higher Plane Of Existence
We Are The Capable Ones, Able To Kill
Off The Cain That Lives Within
Ourselves, The Shells
Breed Away
The
Toxic

Reviews

[Brad]

love the construction of this, brings the point of the whole write home

[masqued_muse]

WHAT can be said in mere encryption to validate such imagery, revelation? This merits those highest expressions of accolades and more....IMHO...I likes it very much!!
masqued^^

[Tasha]

Very intense I really liked the form and flow it adds depth to it. Well done.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[joshua deathdealer]

Very nice form that really adds to the flow of this write. Clever and thought provoking...Great write...xx

[_mal]

Intense, excellent

[Ms. Gruye]

the visual impact is great. Love your last phrasing, Breed away the toxic. viva la

[Rene Velez]

I love the wording and construction, each line just right falling into the next, it gives the poem power when read...but I must ask because I am a seeker, what is a Lucas Wave my friend? I googled it and to no avail..

[Dreamer]

I like the 'Hidden in the open". This is true, sometimes ur looking for things to be soo complicated, to be some hidden secret tht when its right in the open we dont even see it. I like this, makes you think

[Plagued Monumentally]

Interesting. I'm not sure what this is suppose to mean, but it made me very interested for that reason. I really liked the last 3 lines "breed away the toxic". It made me think about it for a couple minutes afterwards.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

"Breed Away The Toxic", ah if ever evil could speak to the race it feeds from I believe those would be it's words, a great piece, well done