You

You

A Poem by GeraldFIngBurke
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Short and simple

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You
are the one I feel
Only time
Eyes of glass

How many years I'd wait
Bite my tongue
It misses me

Lie to me unto myself
Silently damn you to hell


© 2015 GeraldFIngBurke


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GeraldFIngBurke
If it seems the resolution is missing, it's because there isn't one.

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Hi Gerald - (I want to apologise beforehand for being so random on this)

I did get the 'suspended chord' feel of this G.
I was also minded of the quote (paraphrasing here)"What kind of person makes up a lie then convinces themselves that it's the truth".

No resolution ....hmmm very clever my talented friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the read, I'm glad you liked it.



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Hi Gerald - (I want to apologise beforehand for being so random on this)

I did get the 'suspended chord' feel of this G.
I was also minded of the quote (paraphrasing here)"What kind of person makes up a lie then convinces themselves that it's the truth".

No resolution ....hmmm very clever my talented friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the read, I'm glad you liked it.
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ugh... this is sad... but beautifully written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Short, sweet and direct. Nothing ambiguous. Excellent...:)..........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

9 Years Ago

Thank you. This one is more personal than most of my other stuff.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)......

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Added on January 27, 2015
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