That Smile

This is a prayer for my grand daughter who has a rare disease. We need to help her, we need to do all we can. The Miracle is here we just need to find it.

Walk Quietly, walk Quietly
Do not disturb my Angel Sleeping
She has spent the whole night Weeping

Lay down Slowly, Lay down Slowly
She might hear you as you enter In
Another Night that won't be normal, Again

She needs our Love, She needs our Love
That little Angel we call Tieler
She is prettier than any Fire

She'll rest the Night, She'll rest the Night
We need to find her a Miracle
We need Love more than a Sprinkle

I'll hold her, I will hold Her
She is so Strong, its hard to See It
She will make it through, Believe It

I love her So, I love her So
We will all hold her Up
She will show us there's no giving Up

She holds my Heart, she holds my Heart
Just within her Smile
She always had me, all the While

My baby Girl, my baby Girl
You gotta hold on a little Longer
Your little body can get Stronger

We lift you Up, We lift you Up
With our prayers that you'll be Blessed
With our Love, we send our Best

We are waiting, we are Waiting
For the Angels to say the Word
And then the Chorus will be Heard

Little Child, Little Child
I see the Beauty in your Eyes
I will be there when ever they Cry

Rest a while, Rest a While
There are ones who have come to help You
And you will feel them flowing Through

Rest a while, now rest a While
My peaceful Child
My Holy peaceful Child
Show me that Smile, show me that Smile

Reviews

[Patrick]

Very good
This is such a strong piece.
Only thing that confuses me is you putting capital letters in the wrong places.

[Healing Star]

thanks Patrick - this is the way I write, I always capitalize the last word, and I capitalize words that are strong in the verse. I was doing this for about a year and then I read some Walter Russell and he did the same. So I don't think it is wrong, maybe unusual. Walter Russell is never talked about in our schools, but he is referred to as a modern day Leonardo Divinci.