Go On and Shut Me Up

Go On and Shut Me Up

A Poem by Healing Star

Go on and Shut Me Up!
Or do your Best Impression
Of Doin' It
And I'm gonna Scream it Out Anyways
Go On and Shut Me Up
Or Make some Sense of Where your Mind's Got you Runnin'
Go On - Go On - Go On and Shut Me Up!
Or Think that's What You've Done
Go On and Shut Me Up!
I'm IN a Box already ready for the Ground
So what We gonna Move from Here
Go ON and Shut Me Up
What YOu gonna Do
oh - When - oh
What YOu gonna Do
When they Come For You
Go on And Shut Me Up
or Do your Best Impression of what You think that Is
You Know my Fizzy had Done Lost it's Fizz
And You don't think I Know but I Do
I Do - I do - YOu You
Can't Shut Me Up
STick that Sick Mind
Plug It into Someone Else
I'm Thru
So Go Ahead and Shut Me Up
Go On - Go On - Go On
Shut Me Up
Oh - Turn Around
I'm Already Gone
So go ahead and Shut Me Up!
Or Do your Best Impression of what they
Told You that It Was.
Turn Around
I'm Already Gone.

© 2021 Healing Star


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I sense the frustration here of someone who is longing to be heard. Maybe a young person. Reminded me of how shy I was as a young girl. I did much thinking then, but not much talking. With age comes wisdom. I certainly have opinions these days and they tumble forth like a fountain. In fact they positively gush on certain. matters. I enjoyed the read. Thank you fot sharing your poetry.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Healing Star

2 Months Ago

thank you Chris - this is the most reviews I've ever gotten I think - the first thing I put up - O.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Months Ago

All the best to you. Hope you get more reviews.



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"You have not converted a man because you have silenced him.”–John Morley 1874. And very often trying to silence an idea or a voice merely drives it underground where it grows and sometimes thrives to burst forth in bloom in the most unexpected places. I thoroughly enjoyed this write! Bravo.

Posted 2 Months Ago


A quiet woman is a dangerous woman. I learn years ago. Never ask for silence. You will get permanent silence. I liked the energy and the drive in these words my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


When it's not fun anymore, it is time to leave....time to say "adios" and to make sure no one ever shuts you up again! Empowering write. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Healing Star

2 Months Ago

thank you - Lydia - I Now know the True meaning of Getting Out Of Your Own Way
when the fizzy loses its fizz....
we are in trouble...life seems a burden...and we lose interest in love...and goodbye is the only pill that will remedy the situation for us.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Healing Star

2 Months Ago

Jabob - thank you for your Insightful review my Friend - It's not just a Relationship - it's My Who.. read more
I sense the frustration here of someone who is longing to be heard. Maybe a young person. Reminded me of how shy I was as a young girl. I did much thinking then, but not much talking. With age comes wisdom. I certainly have opinions these days and they tumble forth like a fountain. In fact they positively gush on certain. matters. I enjoyed the read. Thank you fot sharing your poetry.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Healing Star

2 Months Ago

thank you Chris - this is the most reviews I've ever gotten I think - the first thing I put up - O.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Months Ago

All the best to you. Hope you get more reviews.
Hello, Star! :)
Could you quiet down a little, please? Haha
I enjoyed this poem. You seem adamant, immovable. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Healing Star

2 Months Ago

thank You - I like your Vibe - you got a smile outta Me - what I was singin' at the HomeDepot just .. read more
Healing Star

2 Months Ago

it's more than just a relationship
It's My Whole LIfe - bein' told to shut up - to not do tha.. read more
when I was younger the world made me more reserve and silent. Though my writing had always been expressive my physical voice was not. Shyness and not wanting to court controversy were my faults in my youth. Now that I'm old I just don't give a damn about what people may think. There is only so much time left and I'm going to say what I feel like saying. Thank you for sharing these wise words in your poetry.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Healing Star

2 Months Ago

thank You Carlos - love that Name - One of the most Amazing Beings on this Planet is Carlos Santana.. read more
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

2 Months Ago

Europa (Earth's cry Heaven's smile) One of the most spiritual love induced passionate moving instrum.. read more
Healing Star

2 Months Ago

thank you My Friend - did I mention I've seen him perform 2 times - the first time at the HardRock i.. read more

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Added on June 23, 2021
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Healing Star
Healing Star

South Jordan, UT



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I am a man who has finally realized he needs to write down what matters to him, that I might learn from myself, what is important, what I value. To capture who I am now, for that is all we have is no.. more..

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