Go On and Shut Me Up

Go on and Shut Me Up!

Or do your Best Impression

Of Doin' It

And I'm gonna Scream it Out Anyways

Go On and Shut Me Up

Or Make some Sense of Where your Mind's Got you Runnin'

Go On - Go On - Go On and Shut Me Up!

Or Think that's What You've Done

Go On and Shut Me Up!

I'm IN a Box already ready for the Ground

So what We gonna Move from Here

Go ON and Shut Me Up

What YOu gonna Do

oh - When - oh

What YOu gonna Do

When they Come For You

Go on And Shut Me Up

or Do your Best Impression of what You think that Is

You Know my Fizzy had Done Lost it's Fizz

And You don't think I Know but I Do

I Do - I do - YOu You

Can't Shut Me Up

STick that Sick Mind

Plug It into Someone Else

I'm Thru

So Go Ahead and Shut Me Up

Go On - Go On - Go On

Shut Me Up

Oh - Turn Around

I'm Already Gone

So go ahead and Shut Me Up!

Or Do your Best Impression of what they

Told You that It Was.

Turn Around

I'm Already Gone.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I sense the frustration here of someone who is longing to be heard. Maybe a young person. Reminded me of how shy I was as a young girl. I did much thinking then, but not much talking. With age comes wisdom. I certainly have opinions these days and they tumble forth like a fountain. In fact they positively gush on certain. matters. I enjoyed the read. Thank you fot sharing your poetry.

Chris

[Healing Star]

thank you Chris - this is the most reviews I've ever gotten I think - the first thing I put up - One Vibration maybe got one more review - It's about my whole life - when I entered 5th grade I asked to be a drummer in the band - but was told we have too many - choose something else - I walked outta there and never returned to music - until about 10 years ago I met Kaz Spiers from Kaz Drums we've made 6 drums together - and soon we'll be makin my Dunun set of 3 - from Cherry wood I brought from Michigan - some is over 200 years old - when I was 5 I remember goin' to pick up the wood from my father's uncles who passed away I think - one piece is 2 1/2 inches thick - 6 inches wide and 9 feet long - wow at todays prices - it may be worth more than gold. bought 2 1/2 trailers full of wood from my Brother In Law for 800 bucks - I can't even imaging what its worth today - who'd a thought - buying plywood 4 months ago would have out preformed gold by 4000 percent. thanks again Chris May we all find Our Peace.

[Chris Shaw]

All the best to you. Hope you get more reviews.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"You have not converted a man because you have silenced him.”–John Morley 1874. And very often trying to silence an idea or a voice merely drives it underground where it grows and sometimes thrives to burst forth in bloom in the most unexpected places. I thoroughly enjoyed this write! Bravo.

[Coyote Poetry]

A quiet woman is a dangerous woman. I learn years ago. Never ask for silence. You will get permanent silence. I liked the energy and the drive in these words my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

When it's not fun anymore, it is time to leave....time to say "adios" and to make sure no one ever shuts you up again! Empowering write. Lydi**

[Healing Star]

thank you - Lydia - I Now know the True meaning of Getting Out Of Your Own Way

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when the fizzy loses its fizz....
we are in trouble...life seems a burden...and we lose interest in love...and goodbye is the only pill that will remedy the situation for us.
j.

[Healing Star]

Jabob - thank you for your Insightful review my Friend - It's not just a Relationship - it's My Whole damn Life - being told - you can't be a drummer when I was in fifth grade cuz they had too many - I turned out the door and never went back to Music - until 10 years ago - when Kaz of Kaz Drums - became my Friend - and we've made 6 drums together - I Drum - I Sing - I AM Free - of the Shut You UP - it's what the World Says eh?

[mattavelli]

Hello, Star! :)
Could you quiet down a little, please? Haha
I enjoyed this poem. You seem adamant, immovable. Thanks for sharing.

[Healing Star]

thank You - I like your Vibe - you got a smile outta Me - what I was singin' at the HomeDepot just now was - I Turned off the Tell Lie Vision - And it Ain't all that Bad - I Turned Off the Tell Lie Vision - And I'm Feeling a little more Glad - You know this World aint' Xactly what they Say - You Ain't Gotta follow there Agenda - I turned Off the Tell Lie Vision - and The world ain't half that Bad - I Turned Off the Tell Lie Vision - Here In South Jordan UTAH - they ain't ready for this Voice I just Gotta Share - but once in a While I get a Smile - You Know I'm gonna Pull thru this - One Heart - One New Friend - One Smile at a Time - I'm Rememberin' - and Bein' Kind - Spirit Rain Down - Spirit Rain Down - Spirit Rain Down on us All - Heal us of All we Been Goin' Thru - when WE Heal from dis - We'll Never Feel Any More Pain - Oh Spirit - Spirit Rain Down.

[Healing Star]

it's more than just a relationship
It's My Whole LIfe - bein' told to shut up - to not do that now - to be what you are not - You are Smaller than even the small you feel when you here what society says - I drum, I sing - I AM Free - Of the Shut Up - NOT NOW - dont' do that - I AM FREE - God Damn - it - Hallelujah thank the LOrd Almighty - I AM FREE

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

when I was younger the world made me more reserve and silent. Though my writing had always been expressive my physical voice was not. Shyness and not wanting to court controversy were my faults in my youth. Now that I'm old I just don't give a damn about what people may think. There is only so much time left and I'm going to say what I feel like saying. Thank you for sharing these wise words in your poetry.

[Healing Star]

thank You Carlos - love that Name - One of the most Amazing Beings on this Planet is Carlos Santana - thank you for your very thoughtful and connecting review - very much appreciated from my Heart - Carlos - Blessings - thought of a experience when I changed from worrying about what others thought of me - thow I never was obsessed by it or anything - the expression I remember what I held onto to help me remember was - What You think of Me is NONE of My Business - I refuse to spend anytime on this separation illusion mind f**k. Peace and Love - We do it for the Love - We do it for the Love - We gotta take care of Each other - watch out for your Sister and your Brother - And remember We do it for the Love - For the Love - We do it for the :ove

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Europa (Earth's cry Heaven's smile) One of the most spiritual love induced passionate moving instrumental songs from Santana. It reminds me of my childhood. I play a little acoustic guitar and by no means am I professional but it brings me peace when I do. It was because of Santana that I learned. I wish you blessings as well and peace on your writing journey.

[Healing Star]

thank you My Friend - did I mention I've seen him perform 2 times - the first time at the HardRock in Las Vegas - in about 2015 I think and then a couple years later outdoor venue - USANA Amphitheater in West Valley City UT - near Salt Lake and has larger Population than Salt Lake City now - due Wet of Salt Lake - my daughter lives within a couple miles of this venue. and the Doobie Brothers opened for the outdoor show. Both Shows were Awesome