I wonder...

I wonder about death....

How will it feel?

When will it happen to me?

Will it happen soon?

I hope it does happen to me

I want death to come and take my soul

What a kind of life do I have?

If the only thing I think about is when will I die...

When will it be my turn?

I wonder is my time now.....

Am I ready to go?

I feel so alone.

That there nothing more in my life to live for

nothing at all..

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Mary Katherine]

very nice. it is very simplistic and i suppose that is part of the charm. the simplicity makes it very dark. very nice again

[ReversingEvolution4TheB..]

You should put your thoughts down into a formal poem and use a thesaurus for a deeper and more intelligent view on a good subject. I like your views, but I believe you can do better at conveying what it is you want to say. You threw a bunch of lines together and called it a poem, when in reality they're just a bunch of thoughts thrown down in a descending list. I don't say this to be rude, just to help you actually form poetry. But you did a great job brainstorming for an amazing poem. This is what most of my brainstorming looks like before I form them into either a free-verse poem or a formal poem. Let me know if I can ever be of any help to you. I'm not the best poet around, but I can sure help you get the basics down. Write On! You get 50 points for trying, 20 points for accepting my review, and 10 points for an AWESOME brainstorm. 80/100.

[deadly healer]

it was a very sad poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. Death is always near. The Native Americans believe. If you look quick enough. Death is on your right shoulder. Sometime life seem confused and hard. Will get better. We must learn the hard way life is fair to all. Always something to live for. Save a piece of nature somewhere. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[April]

ingore the sam spelling i suck at spelling

[E. R. Rawding]

really interesting concept, but you misplaced "turn" with "trun" once

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I completely love this poem, April. You did a good job on it. :)