An Angel

An Angel

A Poem by samie05

An Angel told me that I was precious

As precious as diamonds, so luminous

But that Angel wore a magnificent disguise

That only filled his heart with dark filled lies


The disguise he wore fooled damn little me

Because it blinded me of what I should really see

The raven’s wings was his shielding cape

To cover light’s good hope for his own good sake


If only you didn’t used such a beautiful mask

To fool an angel like to crave so much of your lust

Should God punish his angel who loves someone who is loved by hate

Or let us be to decide our own troubling fate?


Devils were once Angels like me but choose to leave

And stay in the hearts of murderers, cheaters and thieves

But why would a Devil love an Angel like me?

Perhaps he tires of hate and learn to love little me


But not all expectations will come true or be realize

Because all my heart’s hope were just really dirty lies

He said he loves an Angel which was me

But he tires of hoping, which is a sad reality


His love moved to another Angel much better than I

Whose beauty is more enchanting than a simple lullaby

She returned his love and he returned back to heaven

And because of that, she was considered a heroine


And so an Angel like me, sinned something so great

For not giving love to someone who is full of hate

And so I leave my heaven with a broken heart

Not bother to say good bye as I simply depart



© 2010 samie05

Author's Note

It may not have a happy ending but happy endings are always predictable.

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Sometimes matches made in Heaven aren't really divine after all . . . always best to duck out quick, when that happens . . .

Posted 10 Years Ago

Great job done. And don't worry the ending is perfect

Posted 12 Years Ago

I see as I read a lot of feeling and emotion that flow beautifully in this write I also like the choice of words that bring this piece together.
Great job well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I just came out of one conclusion in my mind, you are a heart-broken angel. I can't imagine that a beautiful girl like you will be betrayed. Its okay. God will give a guy more deserving. Great Write. Galing ng mga Pinoy!

Posted 12 Years Ago

It is really good i like it, it sounds like a guy that you once liked and he betrayed you for some one that had told him that they loved him but didnt really. I dot really know about this situation but im sorry.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on March 16, 2010
Last Updated on May 15, 2010



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