Promise Me

Promise Me

A Poem by GlamGirl
"

I want you to promise me

"

I gotta tell you something.


I love you.


I know.


My love for you goes on

forever.

I will do anything,

everything,

for you.


You don’t understand.


What?


I can’t return your

everlasting love.

 

I want you to promise me

one thing.

Don’t forget or regret.

 

I want you to remember.

Remember the good times

and the bad.

 

I want you to live.

Dwell in your

promising future.


I need you.


I needed you.

It is time to move on.

 

I want you to smile.

Smile when you think of me.

Smile back on our memories.

 

I want you to learn.

You are beautiful.

You can do the impossible and

beyond.

 


I will miss you.

You taught me

to remember the good times,

to live in my future.

You taught me to smile,

and showed me that I was

beautiful.

Thank you.


Promise?


Promise.




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Author's Note

GlamGirl
I had a sudden inspiration from this song.
I might take away the dialogue at the beginning.
The left side is the boy talking, and the right side is the girl talking.

**Please leave constructive feedback. This is literally my first love poem**

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I like the dual affliction here that this piece sends to the reader....myriad thoughts structured so well! This is amzing work...it shows the diversity of thought but how much it really connects, common ground is there, just not often seen! Sensational work xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was creative. I like your style!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great read. As previously said it is very sad. It had the feeling of a let down, or let go. Maybe even a goodbye piece. You portrayed a clear message, and the emotions came through well. Could easily be taken into many different directions depending on how you want the story to end. Good stuff.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 9 Years Ago


Superb peace friend, very emotional hearty piece. I think you nailed it. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


It has such a sad undertone running through it, perhaps it's just the romantic in me, wanting always the happy ending, to reach up and grab the fairytale to make it real, to believe in happy ever endings *sigh*
But your poem is more realistic, more synical more real, and for one so young it's exceptional :O)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sad poem. It hurt to read about the girl's heart breaking. Well done!

~Aurora

Posted 9 Years Ago


There is such a gently sad melody flowing here.. that sense of saying goodbye... of letting go though clinging tight.. It hurt to read.. Maybe I dont want anyone to ever say farewell...

Posted 9 Years Ago


WOW, i dont even know how to describe this poem. it was amazing. Well done! i absolutely thought this poem was diffrent but utterly breathe taking. Great Job! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This work is going under one of my favorites. It defently touched me. You are an excellent writer my friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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TJ
i thought this was amazing! i love the back and forth!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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