Flaws

Flaws

A Poem by GlamGirl
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Nobody's perfect

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You see,

I’ve got these flaws.

I ain’t so perfect.

 

I’m a wounded soldier at heart.

I’ve been through countless battles,

That tear me apart.

 

I don’t think I’m beautiful.

The other girls at school look better.

I couldn’t care less about this new jacket,

Or that new sweater.

 

I’m not that smart,

But I try to trudge through.

My best classes are gym and art,

Even though I may seem smarter than you.

 

 

I’m morphed, tattered,

Ripped apart with razor claws.

‘Cause you see,

I’ve got these flaws.

© 2011 GlamGirl


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GlamGirl
I think we all can relate...

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I certainly agree, we can all relate. Nicely Done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Chipper up, panda. Everyone has their flaws. So the only thing you can do is add your note, cheerful or mournful, to the melody of the choir we call life ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


You are very much right, we all can relate to this feeling that you've described so well. I really liked how that last stanza speaks for the first stanza, and then ties it all together with the title. Great job, I loved the write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love it...really spoke to me no one is perfect i actually just finished a poem about being urself i just the time to post it lol u ll b the first i send it to i promise ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometime competition make us not want to be part of the game. I like being on the sidelines. Just trying to be me was hard enough. I like the way you described yourself and the very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's a universal truth. Nobody's perfect. So, we better be happy with what we have. Nice poem. A true poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm in love with thins.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this, we call all relate

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really interesting and different. And yeah, I agree - we all can relate.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this was so perfect i loved it
btw you are a great poet i love mostly all your poems :)
keep that up :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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