What I mean when I say; "I love you"

What I mean when I say; "I love you"

A Poem by Glenn Davis
"

My attempt at a love poem

"
I just want to clarify
What I mean when I say
I Love You
Because I'm not just
Speaking words in vain
I'm making a commitment 
To spend everyday
Letting you know
There's nothing above you
To let you know
That I don't want to be
Just another guy in your life
I'm planning Husband and Wife
I'm saying you can draw the shade
and pull the curtains
But if I'm waking up 
Next to your smile
I'm still waking up because
The room is too bright.
And this is much more 
Than physical attraction
You see I love you
Like the faithful
love their Deities 
So in a few years 
If you start looking like Buddha 
Baby, we can still get freaky
Because in the temple of my heart
You won't change a bit
In there your Beauty is Eternal
And at alter of you is where I'll plant my knees
Because this cleansing inferno 
They call love is the only thing I need

© 2010 Glenn Davis


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I love this! It's amazing, especially
"But if I'm waking up
Next to your smile
I'm still waking up because
The room is too bright."
and
"If you start looking like Buddha
Baby, we can still get freaky
Because in the temple of my heart
You won't change a bit"
it's a brilliant poem (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i love you too!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwww! this is such a great poem!
i loved it!
hahaha we were jsut discussing the budda thing last night hahaha

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice work ;)
even as an attempt on a Love poem, you've did an awesome job.
great Job

indie♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like this, its cute but meaningful

Posted 12 Years Ago


That is quite a wonderful attempt at love poetry... I don't think I could find love defined any better, I really liked this part

If you start looking like Buddha
Baby, we can still get freaky
Because in the temple of my heart
You won't change a bit

cause to love someone is to see beauty all around them.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this! You speak the truth of love, even if it sis painful, unexpected, strange or otherwise. Good job yo!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is cute.
It made me giggle.
Thankyou.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this! It's amazing, especially
"But if I'm waking up
Next to your smile
I'm still waking up because
The room is too bright."
and
"If you start looking like Buddha
Baby, we can still get freaky
Because in the temple of my heart
You won't change a bit"
it's a brilliant poem (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Glenn Davis
Glenn Davis

Columbia, MS



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My name is Glenn Davis Jr. I am not clever enough to come up with a pen name I suppose...... Oh well. I was born and raised in South Louisiana, about an hour below New Orleans, pretty much in the midd.. more..

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