Just Seconds

Just Seconds

A Poem by Globy

Put your arms around me
Make this place the most secure
Take my last breath and breathe it
Place my soul into your soul

Who speaks when my heart is speaking?
Who talks while I talk?
Who bleeds when my life is bleeding?
Warm me I’m so cold
Teach my body to keep up
Please try to wake my heart
I feel so lonely now
Maybe its time to give up

Hold my hand for this moment
I’m so scared to move on
Look my light while it’s fading
There’s not time now my love

All I feel is the kiss you gave me
Your tear drop on my lips
Don’t cry, please be strong my baby
It’s your look I will miss

 
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© 2010 Globy


Author's Note

Globy
Only seconds after a car accident, she holds him in her arms.
This poem are his final words...

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I agree that your words carry a lot of emotion, i especially find the last line "It's your look I will miss" to be very powerful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the words draw you into a story that only the reader can portray

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have a way of drawing emotion into your words. Beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh wow so heart tugging and sad. I am so sorry.
Yo penned your emotions wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad but beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deeply moving words. Impressive and deeply touching images.
Excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life and death are connected just by a finger snap... it can happen so quick and so often.

Beautiful poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moving beautiful expressive word strings~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very, very touching, this was written so well, but its very sad, good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hi, i am here to read mostly and less to share. I am not such a great writer myself, but I enjoy reading a lot! Globy ---------------------------------- CopyrightsWorld.com | We can help you .. more..

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