converging love

converging love

A Poem by G. Marie"floating on an endless sea of poetry"
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love life anguish meditation

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Awaiting contemplating

Life can be cruel

no one said it would be

love can be even crueler

no one said it wouldn't be

 

they have painted love

to be roses and hearts

and dreams that come true

reality paints dreams blue

with broken hearts askew

 

can elusive truths emerge

for lovers that converge

upon lifes secrets

the gods have sealed

in pandoras box

only to guard loves secret

a metamorphasis of souls

joined together in aqua skies

bounded by lies

spirits ascended

as love flies

 

 

© 2010 G. Marie"floating on an endless sea of poetry"


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This is a well crafted poem that was thought about in depth before put onto paper. It states a truth and it the emotions come pouring out line by line. This is done with creativity and a style all it's own with heartfelt, carefully picked words making the whole poem come together completely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


very good..
well written..

hmm.. though..
i suggest you write it this way:

"love can even be crueler"

what do you think? :p

good work..


Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow. This was a beautiful dream. Im speechless....

Posted 9 Years Ago



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G. Marie"floating on an endless sea of poetry"
G. Marie"floating on an endless sea of poetry"

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I am in the process of pubishing my first book soon... a poetry book that I have been working on for six years now...... updates to follow!! more..

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