Gravity

My first real attempt at poetry, just something I threw together.

Gravity

I am falling

fast, the ground 

is rushing up to

meet me. 

I cannot win, the

force of gravity 

it is pulling, 

pulling like a rope.

I am plummeting to

my imminent death.

Oh sweet mortality,

take me, set me free!

I am close now, so 

close to the grand

finale of my life!

SMASH!

Author's Note

Yeah, I tried poetry even though I am a fiction writer. So... what do you think?

Reviews

[qaralynn]

haha lol..love it!! didn't see the SMASH coming :)

[Molento]

like a good russian novel, everybody dies!