The Sacred Milkshake

The Sacred Milkshake

A Story by golden_dooky
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a story about a prophet that goes on an adventure "don't take it seriously"

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One day a god wanted from his prophet to bring him something. So the prophet kept asking the god about it but the god answered: "I will not tell you, you have to discover it by yourself." And so the prophet went on his way until he found a ravine that was full of lava. He entered that ravine barely able to avoid stepping the lava then he found a giant treasure chest so he opened it with great difficulty and he found..... THE "Sacred Milkshake".

When he found the what was inside the chest, he became very mad and he said:

"What was the point of this!? I almost sacrificed my life for a milkshake!?"

Then the god said: 

"Don't talk about something you don't know." and He flew away.

The prophet did not understand what the god had said, so he took the milkshake and went back home.
When the god returned, he said to him in a weak voice: "Drink it." 

"O-okay." said the prophet. And so when he drank it, HE BECAME THE NEW GOD.

~THE END.

© 2018 golden_dooky


Author's Note

golden_dooky
Thank you for reading. Tell me if there's anything I can fix or improve in the story. :)

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Funny parable, this could be a fable in and of itself. Good writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


loved the story,the image was great vas well

Posted 2 Years Ago


golden_dooky

2 Years Ago

thank you my friend i hope you liked it and please tell your friends about it thx.
A humorous write that leaves the reader asking, "McDonalds, Dairy Queen, or some other milkshake?" :) Always good to read something funny in the Cafe. Keeps the mood light. I look forward to reading more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


golden_dooky

2 Years Ago

It seems as if you have read many boring stories before visiting my page. And I hope my story change.. read more
This seems like it was fun to write! I like the silly tone.

If I could offer any constructive criticism, it would be that when the god “flew away”, it was a bit of an abrupt image, because the god being a flying person was not established before.

But overall it was fun to read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


golden_dooky

2 Years Ago

Hey,i understand and im still new like a rookie so i hope you can give a bit of info so i can build.. read more
emipoemi

2 Years Ago

.....................................O-M-G! There's a first........... ! I'm so sorry. I hope you di.. read more
H L Rose

2 Years Ago

😆I second this! ^^^
it would be good to end like it began, where he is searches for his own prophet
interesting tale, it was fun to read

Posted 2 Years Ago


golden_dooky

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I will keep writing until I reach my goal (to be a big and famous writer).
Your story was unpredictable and funny! I enjoyed reading it.

Keep writing!

~Rain.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2018
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