July eve

July eve

A Poem by Lale
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mood

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Salty breeze
Bach on
July eve


© 2020 Lale


Author's Note

Lale
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3JcHWCA-VA

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love your brevity...I can picture myself sitting on the beach with some swig (prefer wine) in my hand with a cool breeze and nothing better than Bach....a serenity and peace. Lovely
Fondly, Betty

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

it feels like home.. thank you so much for your kind review.
Like these kinds of lines, you can play about with them.
July eve.
Salty breeze.
Bach on.



Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for the visit..
yes, I can see you on the beach, having spent the whole day now feeling guilty about leaving the cat all alone
But it is lovely there

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

So lovely that I lost track of the time..
A perfect definition of enjoyment...

Music and nature make very good company

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Makes me think of a sultry beach on a July evening. My mind awash with the possibilities therein. Love it!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

what a nice mood! Thank you for reading, Pestonjee.
Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

It was a pleasure all mine 🤗

.... I just thought you should know, I enjoyed these words much more and far longer than it took me to read them..

Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you did. Thank you for reading. :)
Neville

1 Month Ago


you are welcome..
A perfect six word idyll.

Interesting video, tune rhythmic . Understood some of the French, but grateful for the translation. Thought the music was going to be by Bach... surprised.. but..

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

I love the theme of the video.. sunset, youth & beach.. found it interesting to share. Thank you for.. read more
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

And I really enjoyed sharing it, thank you! :)
Lale

1 Month Ago

you're welcome :)
A impression of nature at moment of stillness when all things are moving. But just our mind is silent and free.

This is my own intepretation of your short writing.

I like it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

That's a beautiful way to look at it.. thank you for sharing your intepretation..
Martin Pahorek

1 Month Ago

Sometimes i have hard time to give review. Even i like some particular writing enormously. I try to .. read more
Lale

1 Month Ago

I see. It happens sometimes. Thank you.
Listening to Bach near the beach....the waves are the background for Bach. ahhhh, the perfect scene. Lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

I totally agree. Thank you for reading.
yes, he goes well with a July breeze, i think...
and those listening, heat up even more ...
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

I always pretend to hear ocean waves in Bach music; it calms me.

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