The w(ie)nd

The cue we need to hear.

As the wind blows
I smile

It's au revoir

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Of all the elements, it is the wind that scares me most. It can start as a gentle kiss on your cheek. A lovely whisper in your ear, and then it can twist and turn into a monster. Extremes. While I am happy to linger with those gentle breezes, when the wind turns in anger, I am more than happy to say au revoir. That's when we part company abd I hide. This little piece of brevity has swept me along Lale.

Chris

[Lale]

The wind is indeed is a two face coin. I'm nore into water. Thank you for reading dear Chris.

[moog-drika]

Seems like you had a great time with the wind, I mean who doesn't? A pleasant one makes you feel fresh, it makes you feel nature a lot more closely. I wish I would have lived in a place where I would be surrounded by a cool breeze all the time. The meeting would never end. There would be no goodbyes and all. It would be like staying around it and letting it enter your soul.
Ahhhh, these 3 lines can bring out so many feelings. Love it!

[Lale]

Yes indeed. The wind is the spirit of nature. I like your interpretation. Thank you for sharing. read moreYes indeed. The wind is the spirit of nature. I like your interpretation. Thank you for sharing.
By the way, I really like "coastal crimes." I liked it so much I didn't know what to say about it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god, less is more.
"ride like the wind, to be free again"---

some of us live this way...by the seat of our pants...i see this as allowing ourselves to be swayed, to be swept up into a journey, just letting it take us where it will.
Some live lives so close to the vest, they never experience any excitement...never think or feel outside the box. Three short lines, and I could respond to this with ten pages.
j.

[Lale]

It is what is it... destiny is inevitable, and nothing is guaranteed. So why worry?
Thank you so much for your deep understanding, Jacob.

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I think at this writing we can see multiply meanings. For me this writing is captured moment , some important fragment . It's very impressive cause it's make my mind wondering what really happen here. It's like painting without particular color or shape. That real fragment what pulsing inside of our abstract world.

[Lale]

That's a very nice explanation. "painting without particular color or shape" beautifully expressed. Thank you for your kind review.

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I am glad you like it my review. Cause I was not sure if I captured complete essence of your poem.

[Lale]

This poem is particularly vague. I read your interpretation and Jacob's. I like the fact that each reader perceive it their way. Thank you.

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What I like about your poetry. There is no clear message or strict lines. Everyone can create own meaning and purpose. For sure you need some imagination to do that. I also can see my own nature at my personal observations of each poem. Today was actually at my head about reviews. Poetry should be reviewed again by poetry. And not strict literature analysis. Have nice day.