Say yes to heaven

Say yes to heaven

A Poem by Lale
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a love poem, again

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Gentle wind dancing with the curtain of beads
of your caravan
taming magic in our veins

Harp in the woods, waterfall flows
and your green eyes telling me to remember
this dance

you smell like heaven
this feels like a dream
Once upon a time in the woods


Be still, my heart

© 2020 Lale


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What a lovely throw back to the past with clear images and soft words leading up to a crescendo of love between the two. I love " harp in the woods waterfall flows"; your writing is very inspiring Lale.
Yours truly,
Betty

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

thank you for taking me back to this humble poem.
Thank you so much!!
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You’re welcome!


you took me back to a festival I went to in deepest rural Bulgaria... it was ever so lovely surrounded by imagery taken straight from Arthurian legend .. for two glorious days we woz stuck in time... thank you poet...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lale

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. I'm glad you liked it. Tahnk you for sharing this experience.
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Somehow this scenery at your poem reminds when I use to live at Ireland. I can feel fresh sounds of nature and there is rainbow always on horizon. I like that last line . Be still , my heart.
This is more then wish it's sound like real prayer.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lale

1 Year Ago

Thank you for sharing this ethereal experience.
You did really well in painting this beautiful scenery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lale

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ethel for reading.
The imagery creates a beautiful scene very nicely here. A piece to lift the spirits when things are going badly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lale

1 Year Ago

I'm glad it made you feel that way! Thank you for reading and reviewing.
A beautiful memory. "Be still my heart."
Yes, indeed, so you can remember the detail slowly and live each second again. Visual and fragrant. Nicely composed Lale.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lale

1 Year Ago

The memory isn't any less charming as the event itself. Thank you loads.

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