Beautiful Day

Beautiful Day

A Poem by Lale

July being July

What a beautiful day to be alive!
Sunshine on the kitchen floor
smells like butter and cocoa powder

Vivaldi evoking the four elements

earth for the daisies
I water them everyday
air swaying with my fine linen curtains
and coffee simmering on dim fire

What a beautiful day to be alive!
I gently sip my coffee as the birds ripping my cookies
I smile

© 2020 Lale

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A poem that refreshes... Beautiful start. The highlighting of four elements (though you missed one) was superbly done in middle of the lines. Great imagery as when i imagine I myself enjoy the beauty....Indeed every day of our life is a worth living as it is a gift from God...Admiring it is the most positive thing any poem can have... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN !

Posted 10 Months Ago

Great imagery; I feel like I'm sitting in your kitchen with you. I also love the repetition, to let us know that a beautiful day it is. I like your use if the senses, especially butter and cocoa powder, plus your general enthusiasm for being alive! Well written, love it!
Fondly, Betty

Posted 12 Months Ago

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I like a begining it's very calming and is looks like you wanna make chocolate . Very wonderful way to start new day. I like how you admit watering of your plants that's make poem even more cozy. And on the end you put your smile . This is beautiful poem about beautiful day .

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thank you for your heartwarming review..
I admire you for your uninhibited expression which conveys the very sense of freedom of which you write. I feel this way every day becuz I live in a gorgeous wilderness spot, but it must be more challenging when one wakes up surrounded by strife or ugliness, so I try to share what I can from my own bounty. With so many messages of drudgery, a message like this is much needed & well received. Especially love the musical tie to 4 elements! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thank you Margie for this uplifting review.

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Added on July 6, 2020
Last Updated on July 8, 2020
Tags: mood



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