A poem

A poem

A Poem by Lale

Heavy heart
I'm carrying
walking this earth
of no ground


Blurry vision
faceless figures
not to shiver
me I try

© 2020 Lale


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This little piece of brevity feels so lonely to me. Like a ghost trapped who can't move on. All good wishes Lake.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

Thank you dear
life with no purpose,no sunshine

Posted 5 Months Ago


Lale

3 Months Ago

it feels that way sometimes...
It seems you are floating in a state of darkness, with a heavy heart; no clarity, only as blurry vision; figures are obscured.. you only see them as a blur, one into the other; short and very meaningful.
I love it!
Yours, Betty

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lale

3 Months Ago

What a beautiful interpretation! Thank you..
I enjoyed this write, i can feel this write

Posted 7 Months Ago


Lale

3 Months Ago

Thank you for reading.
I shiver from loneliness sometimes...the ghosts of relationships past...the ground seems awfully desolate, the heart even more so...
j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Lale

3 Months Ago

I dislike loneliness...
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Only my response can be. You are flying on sublime sea. Divine flattering with cosmos and infinity. It's poetry of beyond of beyond .

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lale

3 Months Ago

Thank you...
Seems like a ghost walking the earth, confused, sad, and lonely.

Nice one.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lale

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much...

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Lale
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