A visit

A visit

A Poem by Lale
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A humble poem

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I hear the waves roaring in my ear 
fogs and drops and storms and breeze
i bury my feet in the warm sand
and the tides carry my grief to another land

© 2021 Lale


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dear Lale ... grieving by the Sea is the best way to
feel the loss as the Tide comes in and later goes out.
A life well lived is a Legacy. truly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


that is an effective response to grief and looks to having been done in the perfect environment

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

tahnk you for your kind review
This is a lovely metaphor you write, sorrowful, and at the same time sending your grief away, realizing that it is a destructive force. The imagery shows it all. This a a way of dealing with your grief. well done Lale.
Best, Betty

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

thank you so much, Betty.
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You’re very welcome!
There is no one way of dealing with grief. Everyone has to find their own way through it. I say go with whatever brings you a little relief from those overpowering waves that can knock you off your feet. Your "humble" poem is very relatable Lale.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

I'm sorry it relates.
all the joy and peace dear Chris
storms and breeze, the really bad times, the gentler times...
but if we plant our feet firmly we will get through the grief...and then swim among waves of new days...smiling.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

what a beautiful visual :)
If it works, stay with it. And tell others who grieve about it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

i hope so. thank you for reading
Hello, Lale! :)
I enjoyed your poem. It is short and meaning. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

thank you so much

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Added on April 10, 2021
Last Updated on April 10, 2021
Tags: tides, waves, storms, grief

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