Spring

Spring

A Poem by Lale
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1st try

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Good morning wish

Spring meant to say bloom
to the roots in our wounds
kissing away the pain

A rendez-vous

Once more as I wait
for the orange tree to bloom
so dark and foggy I barely see

Good night hope

Tis the season to be jolly
waterlilies will definitly bloom
a new beginning awaits

© 2021 Lale


Author's Note

Lale
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-5bMO4nMuk

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Each verse/ stanza written in exquisite soulful touches of expression and imagery. Kudos for this lovely poem!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, right on top of my page.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

thank you so much for reading.
I surely will do.
I have come back for a second read Lale. I so enjoyed your efforts here. Each stand alone delightfully constructed, visual and left its nark with this reader. I hope you pen some more.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

It's always -always- a pleasure reading your reviews. Thank you so much!
i lack inspiration. .. read more
I agree with Betty...stand alone but also tell a nice story put together....

well done.

Kissing away the pain.....that feels so good.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
I love your Haiku studies; they could easily stand alone or they could be a lovely set, very descriptive, images of pain, blossoming, roots, wounds and new beginnings....just kiss away the pain...beautiful....
Thanks for sharing.
Yours,
B

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

Thank you Betty for this lovely review. It feels good to receive all this positive feedback. Thank y.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You deserve it, stay well,
Betty
There is beauty in brevity. Each little poem is full of imagery. Thank you for water lilies, I just love their grace floating on the surface of water.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

Thank you for this beautiful review.
I love waterlilies too.
All three poems were beautiful. I love the days of Spring. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for the days of Spring.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lale

2 Months Ago

Mission accomplished then! :))
You're welcome.Thank YOU for reading.
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You did well and you are welcome my friend.

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Tags: haiku, orange flower, lilacs, bloom, spring

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