Rain

 Hard times fall like rain

 Flooding the whole country

 Everyone's in some pain

 Or is in some kind of misery

 

 The economy is in ruins

 The war is getting even worse

 No one knows what they're doing

 It feels like we're under a curse

 

 Hard times fall like rain

 Flooding the whole country

 Everyone's in some pain

 Or is in some kind of misery

 

 My boyfriend broke up with me

 Leaving me hurt, sad and so alone

 I'm caught up in my misery

 It hurts deep down to my bones

 

 Hard times fall like rain

 Flooding the whole country

 Everyone's in some pain

 Or is in some kind of misery

 

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

A little reminiscent of Bob Dylan's "A Hard Rain's a-gonna Fall" Well, you're right--things look kinda rough right now. I'm not going to give up hope, though. Your poem is well-written.