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A Perfect World

A Perfect World

A Poem by Dylan Cook

 If it were a perfect world

 There would be peace 

 There would be love

 From way up above

 

  If it were a perfect world

  Starving artists would be rich

  Their debts paid in full

  Without any kind of glitch

 

 If it were a perfect world

 There would be peace 

 There would be love

 From way up above
 

 If the teachers would get paid

 A baseball players salary

 And never ever have to go broke

 They would always be happy

 

If it were a perfect world

 There would be peace 

 There would be love

 From way up above

© 2008 Dylan Cook


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Assuming this is a poem and not a song, it has a great message, but the three "perfect world" set of lines is repetitive.

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Added on December 19, 2008

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Dylan Cook
Dylan Cook

Damariscotta, ME



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