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Complain About The Weather

Complain About The Weather

A Poem by Dylan Cook

 Complain about The weather

 Complain about the weather

 That's all you seem to do

 It always makes you blue

 

 Whether it's sunny warm or cold

 Complaining gets really really old

 Why don't you get a lover who's new

 See how it feels when he complains to you

 

 Complain about The weather

 Complain about the weather

 That's all you seem to do

 It always makes you blue

 

 Complain about the weather

 Complain about the weather

 That's all we seem to do

 Doesn't it seem silly to you

© 2008 Dylan Cook


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Hahaha. This was cute and well said.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I wonder where you are? I took time away and have returned to find you've been gone as long as me. Regardless, this is a fabulous piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This almost seems like it belongs in a musical. Or else, it's a Dr. Seuss parody of an argument between would-be exes. At any rate I love the bouyancy even though it's a negative sort of topic. It's very lyrical, and because of that, when you get to " Why don't you get a lover who's new/ See how it feels when he complains to you" I had to laugh, even though it might have, in a more serious context, been completely inappropriate. A great job.



Posted 10 Years Ago



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Dylan Cook
Dylan Cook

Damariscotta, ME



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