A Pissy Way to Start Out AugustA Poem by What Is Good, Phaedrus?here's a collection of shorts I've spewed up in the last couple days. i'd never claim greatness (i think i suck, honestly), but i'd like to throw these out here and see what kind of feedback i might get. umm, they're all pretty much rough drafts . . . aThe following are all from the last couple days. My NCO (sergeant, for non-military) has been pissing me the hell off
Deeper into myself Where no one else can find me I descend Clothe me in black shadows where There is no communication No frivoulous pretention No maniacal insidious rank structure Where man on bottom remains on bottom
No light can follow me here, anyways.
CS 02 AUG 2008
Six Jolly Ranchers Remain Two grape Two blue raspberry And two watermelon I saved them out And threw the bag away If you were still here they would have been eaten up long ago But since you're not, I'll eat each one with a sadistic pain Biting hard on one half-sucked Until it becomes cement between my molars And it takes sheer will to kill the frustration Opening my jaw
CS 02 AUG 2008
A mutilated heart to call my own And a river of broken dreams to swim in My boat has capsize upon its helm And drowned in a dismal death fit for fishes "One day closer" is what I would say Conscientious of my impending mortality Wiser then and calloused now This bleak and hopeless day Fit for murder
CS 03 AUG 2008
The Dove Oh, sleeping dove with a broken wing I saw the place they laid your body down Bedecked with ornaments all around God carried you to where the angels sing
I cried a song they had me play Next to your sweet head rested on pillow down And though on spirit's wings you've flown My thoughts wander to remember you today
Sadder than a normal hour In today's chapter of my life's book How surgery, my second mother took And left me weeping without power
If I had your broken wings in which to hide This present darkness would be but a fable I could feast on the banquet of unconditional love at your table And find this world more condusive to abide.
In Loving Memory of Catherine Von Haden, my second and more present mother, R.I.P CS 03 AUG 2008
The Wolf Spider He leaps from rock to rock Like an Olympian Eight white-striped legs on a yellow abdomen He resembles a pouncing frog And tastes his environment with a talking jaw Speaks comfort to me That not all who hide in the crevices Are rotting There is a beauty in the solitude And a friendship in the venom From the safety of distance, He gives me salve And visits me In the loneliest space
CS 03 AUG 2008
To turn a torn and tattered page With delicate, broken fingers One last, forgotten prayer And a long reach for the trigger Skin against steel Flesh within bone Man against men Lost, but not home Lost, but for a broken street lamp still shimmers Ripped, torn fence Sweat water and blood-stained stamp Jagged jean pants Further feels forever fails to fine a fellow Walker
CS 03 AUG 2008 © 2008 What Is Good, Phaedrus?Author's Note
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Added on August 3, 2008 AuthorWhat Is Good, Phaedrus?NomadicAboutThe modern version of an indentured servant with a songwriter's complex. Also, been discovering a stark love for Basho . . . more.. |