A "Beautiful" Love Story Ends

Love,a felling we all desire, we all need...but is it that beautiful....

A story of a boy smart enough
loved a girl with all his might,

He knew getting her is tough
but believed
his heart will get his flight.....

Early in morning
long route he took
At her bus stand,to get a look

She will notice
it was a chance
but when she did air filled with romance.... 

It happened though late
they became friends, he thanked his fate 

They met everyday,
talked all day,
friendship dense
boy was with her......nothing to be tensed....

 Finally the day came
his heart fully loaded
In front of the girl exploded...

with excitement??
No but with fear
his heart tried......
everything was destroyed when she denied....

world for him shattered
Boy was shaken
Beautiful feeling of love lost
A cute heart broken....

Girl was angry, she left at the moment,
under extreme agony ,the boy went

Something happened the same night
Sitting alone thinking, the girl realized

She did wrong,, she was sad
She also loved, was equally mad.......

Alone with his plight
he cried....cried...the whole night...

'Sob, Sob',the heart beating faster
he took a decision....complete disaster....
guided by pain, he saw a knife
A FLASH..."He took his life".....

She heard, can't believe,
felt guilty overtook by grief.. 

Every day her heart bled,
A piece was missing she solely needed.....

She was shocked how life bended
A wrong decision

on a sad note ....."A beautiful love story ENDED"....

Author's Note

is it gud??

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

This one has some interesting ideas and, again, your gift for stirring imagery. However, it feels like a first draft, and not ready for critiquing or editing. Let me know when it's ready.