this made me imagine an afterlife...where we are all just suspended, floating....the breeze taking us where it will...because in infinity we have no energy to steer our course...we just go where whatever it is takes us.
magical write...
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Thanks, j, the kinetic energy is all encompassing, exploding self regulating and most importantly to.. read moreThanks, j, the kinetic energy is all encompassing, exploding self regulating and most importantly to us writers, alive, cheers,
my cup of tea gram! love the poetry of science ... which i see in all the fields of it .. ;) i think the contrast in "entropy...." is unique speaking of relativity ... the law of conservation of mass is only contradicted in physical forms ... further in .. the spilt tea remains ;))))))))))) love your poem sir! especially how you make it personal and singing within your speaker
E.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Glad you liked it, E, try it with some honey sometime, lol we are all destined for decay, the real E.. read moreGlad you liked it, E, try it with some honey sometime, lol we are all destined for decay, the real Einstein has spoken, and even he thought God was having a laugh, lol
honey is good stuff! i should drink more tea .. i keep telling me self ... the real Einstein to me h.. read morehoney is good stuff! i should drink more tea .. i keep telling me self ... the real Einstein to me had an incredible life .. so spontaneous and pushing the boundaries ... and so very human in his admitted weaknesses ... the story of his life is inspiring to me ... ;)
4 Years Ago
so you are into sorting mail, shagging and quantum physics, that you discovered but don't believe in.. read moreso you are into sorting mail, shagging and quantum physics, that you discovered but don't believe in, legend, lol
4 Years Ago
ahahahaha well .... now you put it that way ...........
It’s such a mystical place, that pond of the mind. I think of it as flashing, flickering endlessly, always rippling, never exhausting. The muse has such ammunition at her disposal. Your words create quite a picture for me here.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, DIVYA, you got the meaning spot on, the mind is constantly flashing and flickeri.. read moreThanks for reading, DIVYA, you got the meaning spot on, the mind is constantly flashing and flickering endlessly always rippling, never exhausted, loved this review, you have paraphrased the, thank you entire poem
Damn those neurons just don't last forever. They wear out like one of those solar lamps idiots hang in their gardens to ward off ghosts and clowns. Likey your style buddy as always food for thought with broken glass mixed in!
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Haha, they do last forever, not in their chemical state, but the kinetic energy keeps bouncing, neve.. read moreHaha, they do last forever, not in their chemical state, but the kinetic energy keeps bouncing, never ending, suspended in the eternal moment, so to speak,
Me likey your muse graham from one wave to another:) all true all very true
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Sorry gram
4 Years Ago
kind of stumped on the Scottish gram thing you mentioned I looked... were you referring to the clan .. read morekind of stumped on the Scottish gram thing you mentioned I looked... were you referring to the clan name?
Ik ben ein Scotlander, ik ben ein auslander, lol make of that what you will ?
4 Years Ago
ohhhh meine familie ist aus österreich ein alter und seltener tiroler namens trakofler It was an ho.. read moreohhhh meine familie ist aus österreich ein alter und seltener tiroler namens trakofler It was an honest mistake I have two friends named Graham
4 Years Ago
Neit problem, my kleinja leibling, my missus has two names for her bunny, one is flaccid, the other .. read moreNeit problem, my kleinja leibling, my missus has two names for her bunny, one is flaccid, the other is full on, lol,
Caged In An Animal's Mind
Caged in an animal's mind;
No wish to be more or else
Than I am; a smile and a grief
Of breath that thinks with its blood,
Yet straining despite; unsure
In my stir .. more..