"Let them eat blood"

"Let them eat blood"

A Poem by gram linski
"

Uncle Albert has spoken

"
"Bring me blood pancakes 
                             (AB negative)",

shout/ordered the scientist to
the naked pagan fool


                       "with melted butter

                                                and jam,


I will eat your unpoetic
uncouth unrefined mind
I will suck upon your frazzled
marrowbone brain

and flummox you with
language of the most delicate
                                  kind


butterfly wings
tearing your eyelids
into unblinking unstaring eyes

lost in a mushroom magic
                                   haze/daze (happy)
A cup of spilt soma tea

a wee pint of Guinness 
and a geometric shape or two

top o' the morning
                  (world), Ma


E = Noodle Confused squared

© 2019 gram linski


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It's good that I have O+. Which is average I hear. So that makes your taste rather refine and me safe. But if you want a brain that tastes like peanut butter and jelly, I'm your man...
I read the other reviews. Its probably necessary reading. Guiness-yes. Geometric shapes-not a fan. Mushrooms - it's all good until you have that one bad trip where there is a constant heavy buzzing noise that wont go away. Soma tea- never had it.
In all seriousness, this site can be too serious. I do like this though. Its nicely chaotic and visionary, but I dont know whether to take it seriously. Which I guess is good.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

1 Month Ago

haha, the first sensible review I've had,, from a man with peanut jelly brain, this site can indeed.. read more



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Favorite part = last line . . . your witty reference to a cafe favorite ties in with my other favorite:
"I will eat your unpoetic
uncouth unrefined mind
I will suck upon your frazzled
marrowbone brain" . . .
All those "un-s" = how I feel when reading abstract poetry, tearing my eyelids!
*heh! heh! heh!* Love this poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


gram linski

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Margie, hope Einstein does too, haven't heard back from him yet ...
It's good that I have O+. Which is average I hear. So that makes your taste rather refine and me safe. But if you want a brain that tastes like peanut butter and jelly, I'm your man...
I read the other reviews. Its probably necessary reading. Guiness-yes. Geometric shapes-not a fan. Mushrooms - it's all good until you have that one bad trip where there is a constant heavy buzzing noise that wont go away. Soma tea- never had it.
In all seriousness, this site can be too serious. I do like this though. Its nicely chaotic and visionary, but I dont know whether to take it seriously. Which I guess is good.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

1 Month Ago

haha, the first sensible review I've had,, from a man with peanut jelly brain, this site can indeed.. read more
Whoever the bully was, at least he prompted you to write a refreshing piece haha.....
Nicely drafted :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


gram linski

1 Month Ago

thanks nazia, there was no bullying of any kind, it was a piss take poem towards a talented writer .. read more
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DAH
This is delightfully surreal to say the least. Each line punches like a hefty bully in line at a middle school cafeteria. This is the experience of a vast array of poetic diction all the down to the abstract Einstein equation. Unique!

Bravo, gram!
DAH

Posted 1 Month Ago


gram linski

1 Month Ago

thanks DAH, there is a backstory, making it less unique, a bit of japery with the esteemed poet Ei.. read more
DAH

1 Month Ago

Ah, I see! Then, yes, funny, really funny ...
Ah the school bully punches poor, harmless Einstein on the nose with his usual sharp right hook of a poem. How could you gram?

Posted 1 Month Ago


gram linski

1 Month Ago

the joke is on you, hahaha, it's called my left hand,
John Alexander McFadyen

1 Month Ago

and here was me thinking you ambidextrous!
gram linski

1 Month Ago

yes I can actually s**t on both, thank you very much

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