Yesterday

Joint

beer

                 f*g

f*g

                 wine

crisps

                 f*g

poem                         alcohol

                 wine

f*g                             joint

                 joint

bath                           bong

                 pasta

joint                           D,f,s

                 f*g

wine                           sleep

                 joint

                                  repeat

                 shave

                                  Townes

                 cigarettes

                                   Van

                                    Zandt

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

This is the trip to the supermarket that was meant to be, but then got sidetracked by the good things in life, though I'm not allowed to say that cos I'm grounded.

[gram linski]

thanks Paul, lol, nae luck, aye the pub is on the way to the shops, what water and cornflakes again, where's the f*****g milk,

[Gee]

Jeez, most of that reads like a normal day for the men of Dalry in Ayrshire where my good lady wife hails from :) Was once royally abused by six beer and drug addled f**k wits whilst walking the hound at 8am on a Sunday, however the fella leading this sextet was later smacked on the head with a hammer by the good lady wifes uncle, ouch, and warned as to his future conduct :))
Good morning, hope you are well.

[gram linski]

am grand thanks, your anecdote reminds me of any quiet sunday anywhere in this great and not free land, haha

[R.E. Ray]

Weed, booze, tobacco, food, music and writing (poetry)... with a few different slang terms that come with a buzz from drinking and writing. Yesterday? Perhaps a refrain, too? It's a mood that shapes an image, somewhere in the fog of the writer's den. Maybe... another original, creative piece from you, gram.

[gram linski]

It's not everyday, just yesterday and I am on holiday, glad you enjoyed,

[Cortez]

Different...can’t seem to follow but, this comes to mind. My poem called “SHOT AFTER SHOT!” By Cortez

[gram linski]

Hey Cortez, nice bit of self promotion, thanks for reading, will return the favour,

[Eilis]

A little Townes Van Zandt never hurt anyone. I discovered him through Ray LaMontagne who built himself a cabin in the woods in Maine and lived without electricity for so some time so he could break into music. I don’t suffer enough for my art. That must be why I’m not writing bestselling books.

Ah well, there’s always tomorrow. Yesterday being passed an’ all. The format of this is interesting in that when I look at it on the screen everything has the illusion of tipping toward the word beside it and falling down. So the days go.

Cool poem, Gram. I want to say Dadaesque, but it more makes me think of Sam Beckett.

[gram linski]

"we are all just waiting around to die," as the great man once said, would rather be Dadaesque than Beckettesque, actually came on-line to delete this, didn't realise people might enjoy

[Eilis]

You’re definitely more Dada. I’m the Beckett. In my usual style I reference everything to myself. Ta da. The hubris of my poetic ego

[gram linski]

haha, the hubris of my poetic ego seems to involve shouting and swearing as loudly as you can with a pen, got me this far and keeps the a******s away

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of college...waking up with the smoke, cigs or otherwise...
and the day with everything happening between those cigarettes..

j.

[gram linski]

pretty much, j. except for the learning and the co-eds,

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased to see a bath and shave featured in your day gram :) Plenty of f**s, joints, booze and repetition. Pasta and crisps? You aren't looking after yourself. Where's the fruit and veg? I have to admit there:s some stuff here on your third list I didn't understand. Maybe it's better that way. You didn't mention poetry.

Chris

[gram linski]

thanks Chris, wrote a poem in between the crisps and the f*g, you're reading it, lol

[Chris Shaw]

Well I'm pleased poetry featured in your day. Gives the day some structure. Now what about your fruit and veg? You know it makes sense :)

[Chris Shaw]

I think you need a hug.

[gram linski]

well the pasta did have tomatoes and red onion and peppers in the sauce garnished with a handful of spring onion and the crisps were potato, so that's your 5 right there, but I will take the hug, thanks Chris, :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A good day then bro!
Interesting and brittle in its format and in the content that expresses a picture of someone spending a day in self indulgent mode. Now where did I put that joint?

[gram linski]

Aye no bad, the joint is probably in your pocket waiting to be secreted away and inhaled as you wank over pictures of Marlena Dietrich, top of the morning,

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Tell Chris 'top o tha mornin' and to read you again dear poet! Oh surely you have time for the gym?

[gram linski]

I used to drive to the gym, jump on a bike then drive home, now I cycle to the gym, don't go in, then cycle home