The Soundgarden of Delights

The Soundgarden of Delights

A Poem by gram linski

The soundgarden of delights
kicking chaos around the furniture,
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destroying destruction with a
sudden un-stamp of sullen boot
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carving riots into the wind
screaming hellfire mute sound
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       shards of unsmashed mirrors
scatter the ground
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reflecting the bite of
        br
           oken diamond night
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hoarse laughter barked from throat
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               animal eyes
                 intensify
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unhinged doors bumping / banging
                                  clouded dark cloud
     scuffed testament to brok
                                             en toe
                                    
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moonhowl gaggling
                 giggling indentations
      scavenging  noise into feral ( ear ) drums
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the kicked chaos - form   - 
slumped and beaten
             stretches         yawns
              creaks his old time bones
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" Right ya cheeky f****r,
         Let's try that one again, "
     

© 2021 gram linski


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The sound garden of delights, is far removed from its name. You use the word chaos twice, as if once wasn't enough. Where is this place I ask myself? Could it be gram's local on a Saturday night? Or maybe any city centre where too much booze fuels an almighty fire. Anyways, I won't be planning a visit anytime soon :)

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review, Chris the situation was more inner than out er in the pubs haha, you should t.. read more



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Kicking chaos around the furniture......brilliant stuff Gram. Structure is awesome and I love your turn of phrase

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

1 Year Ago

thanks Davey, I'm sure you know the feeling haha
The sound garden of delights, is far removed from its name. You use the word chaos twice, as if once wasn't enough. Where is this place I ask myself? Could it be gram's local on a Saturday night? Or maybe any city centre where too much booze fuels an almighty fire. Anyways, I won't be planning a visit anytime soon :)

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review, Chris the situation was more inner than out er in the pubs haha, you should t.. read more
Shades of Kristallnacht here. One can almost see the SS men wreaking havoc without restraint. On the other hand, it could just as easily be the US Capitol last January 6th.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

2 Years Ago

aye Kristallnacht indeed, John, thanks for reading and enjoying, it could apply to most places at an.. read more
this is paradoxical genius....
excuse me while I stretch, yawn and creak...
and that poor brok
en toe.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

2 Years Ago

thanks, j. I always enjoy your poemette reviews, appreciate your reading my nonsense, it means a l.. read more
OK! You've thrown down the Halloween gauntlet here, my friend! This is summa the most unique spooky writing I've seen so far this season. I love the subtlety and yet done with screaming descriptives. I envy your loosey-goosey way with words (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

2 Years Ago

Hey Margie glad you enjoyed this one, looosey goosey and screaming descriptives do sort of sum me up.. read more

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