Mutual Disturbances

Mutual Disturbances

A Poem by gram linski

Mutual disturbances;
-
The darkness enters invades, corrodes, swamps
feeling, in a torrent of black wave
drowns self and being
drowns brain and brawn, and the
tiny island called hope on the blurred
blunted horizon slips beneath
the deep deep blues,
-
     " We have come for you, friend, brother,
     lover, we have come to claim what we have 
     always owned, we have come for you, "
-
with shark - like intensity
I bite, I fight, I swim into the shadows
            bared teeth and 
anger /
            the attitude of the damned
-
I hear the whisper in the under flow
the current dragging me deeper and darker
-
     " there is no papillon's raft of
     coconut dreams, no happy horizon
     no new born day no life jacket of jasmine,
     we are here for you, with you, 
     are you, 
we are here for your comfort and joy
support, 
-
( and will kill you in your sleep )
  -
 and we have thrown away
      the key    heeheehee
-
A smile spreads like rainbow leaves
caught in the  ... /    air
damp and autumnal the kiss of a 
crisp sharp wind, uncaring and vengeful
willing and wild
laughter echoes across the deserted park
-
     "hahafuckingha,
     O deary, deary me, 
     you mean to say ; you're locked inside
with me,  ah, yes, "
-
          let the fun begin

© 2021 gram linski


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bad trip for sure gram! your hero has found out a truth too late it seems .. we play .. we pay ... there really is a Heaven and Hell says i; but i think we are all going to be surprised one way or another .. i see demons coming to take what is theirs ... our lives, our actions have consequences .. those who choose to live in disregard of that surely can and will loose their soul ...for those who don't know they have one .. doubly shocked and the anger and the
"I bite, I fight, I swim into the shadows
bared teeth and
anger /
the attitude of the damned" will consume ... all the coulda wouldas .. seeing what is lost .. Dante's inferno without a doubt says i! vivid story telling my friend .. super important theme in my world anyway ... wishing you the best always .. and thank you for sharing .. right here at the Cafe'
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

1 Year Ago

hey Mr E thanks as always for your great insightful review, aye that duality of angel /devil whisper.. read more



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A dark and desolate write, but a poetic and inventive one! We all have our demons to face, whether we carry them with us, or whether they catch up with us later!

Posted 1 Year Ago


bad trip for sure gram! your hero has found out a truth too late it seems .. we play .. we pay ... there really is a Heaven and Hell says i; but i think we are all going to be surprised one way or another .. i see demons coming to take what is theirs ... our lives, our actions have consequences .. those who choose to live in disregard of that surely can and will loose their soul ...for those who don't know they have one .. doubly shocked and the anger and the
"I bite, I fight, I swim into the shadows
bared teeth and
anger /
the attitude of the damned" will consume ... all the coulda wouldas .. seeing what is lost .. Dante's inferno without a doubt says i! vivid story telling my friend .. super important theme in my world anyway ... wishing you the best always .. and thank you for sharing .. right here at the Cafe'
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

1 Year Ago

hey Mr E thanks as always for your great insightful review, aye that duality of angel /devil whisper.. read more

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